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extazya
Extazya

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Posted : Nov 11, 2006 15:37
hello ppl , new demo .. need some comments pls

http://www.speedyshare.com/561831255.html

BooM
YONI.           E-mail : johnnydayan@gmail.com
NetroSysteM
NetroSystem

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Posted : Nov 11, 2006 16:02
hi Yoni my friend, great tunes keep rocking.
hehe Pornodelia - great name man...

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MistyX


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Posted : Nov 11, 2006 16:10
H-A-S-H-M-A-L BRO !yoni great demo... hope you will take seriously what i told ya !
Keep it underground m8
Maya
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Posted : Nov 11, 2006 16:16
killa track.....

this artist will smash many brains soon...


all the best ExtAzya



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extazya
Extazya

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Posted : Nov 11, 2006 16:24
thx to all

more replays ?           E-mail : johnnydayan@gmail.com
Zeyon


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Posted : Nov 12, 2006 05:10
Nice and atmospheric when it really gets going, but don't like the intro-breaks..
Surely some pretty nice FX-breaks, but for me it sounds like the track/demo just builds up to the next "FX-break" and then you put some other synths in, not really my style, corcerning the structure..
I think you have some nice steps to build your track on, try to do a bit more variation in the track-structure as mentioned, introduce some melodies (If it's your point with this track, to present a melody), otherwise, just keep on evolving the twisted elements, the ones you have at the moment are fine but this clip tends to get a bit too monotonous imo.
Keep it up.
          //Zeyon.
extazya
Extazya

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Posted : Nov 12, 2006 09:21
thx mate , i take care of the intro breaks and the clips

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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine

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Posted : Nov 14, 2006 13:13

Sure you have a potential and talent but you should work much hardly on your sound and all your production . Many unnecessary breaks , Lots of parts in without any musical connection with the other sounds in all is 'Blagan' Cant hear the track in peace & quiet , No sense and a stable story and a frame to hug the all , Try focus on your music , Doing all right .

Didt liket the beginning i was wating and expectant to somthing more dark and not with an regey atmos and feeling , Try find an hardish talikng pad for this area . More synth pls , Where them ? . Work more with hh's to drive the track (Almost cant hear them) . Im listening the demo here on the highyer volume and seems no neighbor come , Try not to touch your volume master , Hill the sounds , work on your quality .
You should open more efects on your bass and kik to make all being more here and open , Cant hear this 'Wow' perception and sensation , Make all more natural and live . More synths , Leads and life in , Make all more fat , Some good tools can do that .

Overal find some realy good ideas . Take the time and work neat and be attentive to your musical projects and all will be fine .
extazya
Extazya

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Posted : Nov 14, 2006 14:16
thx cardinals cartel , well i dident work on the sound , i usaly work on the sound when i am finishing my last skitz , here is a first skitz , and i needed to know what you think about the ideas , about the pads and more atmosphre and synths dont worry i have it all

thx
cheers
yoni.           E-mail : johnnydayan@gmail.com
xaBBu
xaBBu

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Posted : Nov 15, 2006 12:39
Hi there yoni !

I hear that your production gets better and better.
Nice bassline man, I like it. As you say you still working on the sound itself after making your "skitz": I noticed the bassline getting eaten sometime a little. Just needs some finetuning on the mix/eq there. Nice work with fx ...but sometime it seems it can be a little more tight(fit it a little more into the measure) or try to not switch it diretly but let the different fx "flow" into each other.

Imo it needs some more games with percussion and rythm synths. Rythm is almost all the same throughout the track.

I would love to hear more room on the sweeps and wooshes ... want to see the moving.

Your sounds are getting more interesting from track to track, just maybe try to work more on your arrangments.

Good work!

Nathan
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Posted : Nov 15, 2006 22:04
I am not a big fan of this style but I can hear some interesting sounds here. You should pay attention on details. The passages are not good, they break the flow. You should stop the random mode and consider building a certain structure. It's just like a movie without a script.
Overall it clear that you got talent - work on it.

good luck

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extazya
Extazya

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Posted : Nov 17, 2006 18:29
thx guys , well its a first skitz so i dident gave a thought like nathan said , i worked it all , i finished rebuilding , i will post you the final skitz when it will be perfect to me .

thx and cheers
yoni.           E-mail : johnnydayan@gmail.com
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Posted : Nov 22, 2006 04:59
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