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Posted : May 14, 2012 16:10:09
Hi! This is the first track I ever produced, and never thought of posting here. It was all made using Sylenth1 (appart from the drum samples) but I'm gonna remake it using my analog gear now, still need some polish and some arrangement adjustments.
I would love to know what you think about it, it will be included in a EP i'm working on and planning to send to some record labels.
I'm not happy with it yet, it's too looped and lacking more psychedelic stuff, all of this will be corrected. Right now it's too euro trancy I think...
Nomad Moon
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Posted : May 15, 2012 01:32
Its very good, not euro trancy at all, at 1.40 i think could introduce a new sounds , some stabs conversation until the other break and maybe play with more hats, but dont change the song too much it's very good in structure
klippel
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Posted : May 15, 2012 10:45
+1 on nomad moons comments!
reminds me of akd, and thats a compliment for sure. first track? honestly? if so: wow.
http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel "I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons
Equilizyme
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Posted : May 15, 2012 21:47
no man, u are good with this one reminds me of liquid soul if you listen to him, sweet stuff. yeah maybe a few sounds would be good, but honestly i think its pretty good mate, if this is your first track then you should make another, I find that every track i make is better than the last and i am more efficient in the overall production. have fun --
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Grevinsky
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Posted : May 15, 2012 23:44
very nice track.
A few more sounds here and there wouldent hurt. Great structure, and very well mixed and the sound fit well togheter.
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shellbound
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Posted : May 17, 2012 20:21
yeah, nothing euro trancey about this at all. just good ol' psyprog. i also agree with comparisons: liquid soul until the break, akd after.
hollo321
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Posted : May 18, 2012 15:34
i usually dont listen to progressive but this is goood, i also think reminds me of liquid soul
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Posted : May 19, 2012 00:48
WOw!
Thx for all those beautiful comments, they really drive me towards my goal: finish an album!
I can't believe you guys enjoyed it so much, and even compared it with great artists, I feel really lost for words.
I'm gonna work on it a bit more, add some more psychedelic stuff, to sum it up gonna polish it. I think we'll never be 100% satisfied with our music...
Sound Surgeon
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Posted : May 19, 2012 02:46
Very good work!
I think if you put more effort into percussion work it will make this (and future) tracks even better!
Misha
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Posted : May 19, 2012 04:28
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On 2012-05-19 02:46, Sound Surgeon wrote:
Very good work!
I think if you put more effort into percussion work it will make this (and future) tracks even better!
reminds me of liquid soul if you listen to him, sweet stuff. yeah maybe a few sounds would be good, but honestly i think its pretty good mate, if this is your first track then you should make another, I find that every track i make is better than the last and i am more efficient in the overall production. have fun 
