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PeYoTe KiNG
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Posted : Jan 10, 2004 12:14
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i would like 2 get a comment about this 1....
i'm working without a sound card (4 now) & i have a litle problem with the sound (it sounds good on my machine, sounds nasty in other machines...
but i would like 2 hear ure opinion, so i'll know what 2 improve.
ok, so its a 2 minutes demo, from a final project of mine, have fun!
http://www.short.co.il/psy-o-matic.mp3
  The reality is a result of acidless blood
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Mike A
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Posted : Jan 12, 2004 12:39
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It sounds bad because you don't have monitors, and then you should get to know your speakers. Try listening to good tracks, and make the sounds like them - instead of what sounds good to you.
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PeYoTe KiNG
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Posted : Jan 12, 2004 12:56
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well, the thing is that i'm trying 2 do something diffrent, dark, psychodelic, powerful & not to do what other artists doing, & thats the whole idea in being an artist, but 10x man 
i'll buy monitors & soundcard soon, 10x 4 the advice mike.
have a  day.......
peace
The reality is a result of acidless blood
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Djruth
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Posted : Jan 12, 2004 16:35
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hey man..
I just listened to you stuff...
to me it sounds pretty good.. of cause it´s always a matter of taste , but i really enjoy´d this one..
I say keep makin what sounds good to you! = )
and never be afraid to try out new stuff...
cause no matter how good you make the mastering sound, it´s the energy in there that makes you think about what you are hearing..
I mean... sure i have heard realeased trax with much worse sound than this one..
so keep experimenting and your sound will improve as you get better for every track..
see ya around..
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Mike A
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Posted : Jan 13, 2004 00:02
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I'm talking about sound. Don't do the same style, but same sound.
I mean that if in all pro tracks the bass sounds a certain way, but in your track it sounds different, and you think that it sounds better, most chances that it's not and it sounds better only on your speakers.
Once I realized that, my own music became much better - and I got no monitors as well.
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synaex
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Posted : Jan 14, 2004 02:37
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Nice, very very nice, and imho, the bass sounds quite good, but i'm only able to listen it on my headphones at the moment.
Really like the bassline and the flanged-like breaks, maybe cut a little of the cheese at 1.30, the voices are good, but the 303 (i think this is what u made it with, similar sound) melody is not really my thing, cut some notes out of it maybe, to avoid cheesyness.
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Kaz
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Posted : Jan 15, 2004 15:21
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Sounds like the volume is way too high (at +4-5db, instead of the 0 it should be for getting a clean sound, or that you set a limiter on a way too extreme level). The breakbeat work is smooth, but the tambourine sequence is at too high a volume and too monotone for the rest of the track - try EQing out all freqs under 1KHz on it, and then maybe adding a noise gate. Also a bit of variation on the volumes on that would be nice. Volumes are not entirely accurate, but the general meaning is understood.
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PeYoTe KiNG
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Posted : Jan 16, 2004 15:36
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well, ppl , thank u all for being so helpful, i appreciate this, really.
i'll upload some improved stuff very soon.
peace 
The reality is a result of acidless blood
listen 2 my music at myspace :
http://www.myspace.com/peyoteking |
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