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Please review my first sample track ....
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highpsybutterfly
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Posted : Aug 4, 2005 13:21
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Posted : Aug 4, 2005 13:47
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post it on the new tracks section too
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highpsybutterfly
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Posted : Aug 4, 2005 16:15
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Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Aug 4, 2005 16:52
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@HighPsybutterfly: The bassline is ok but i would change the kick man. I don't like it very much(Sorry but maybe my personal taste)
You need to put more sounds HighPsy. Its not enough at all. Also, the sounds in there are quite basic, you need to work on synths more i think. You should download some patches and try to do some reverse engineering. there are some amazing tutorials in the equipment section. You can learn so much from there.
Sorry man but i don't like the atmosphere at all - The continuous sound that plays with the other instrument. plays till half way stops and then appears again toward the middle part. i can't express it properly Sorry!
HighPsy, where are the Percussions????? You have to have them in there man, a lot of the groove and power comes from Percussions. use some open and closed hi-hats, snares, tamb. there are loads of things man. I'm sure you will see the difference.
So, try and use some percussion, lot more sounds, try and change the atmospheres and then check it out and see what it sounds like. 
Good Luck man! 
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Meta-Morphosis
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Posted : Aug 4, 2005 17:45
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I Would agree with bharath there he has summed it up .... the track lacks the atmosphere totally and the bassline is not supporting what you are trying to do... the precussions are missing man...its sounds very empty!!!
Play around with your loops man  ...u can definately work on this track...change the bassline though work on more sequences...get more life in the track!!!
Upload the morning version also ... lets see what have you done different there!!
My wishes are always there bro...
karan
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highpsybutterfly
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Posted : Aug 4, 2005 19:45
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see im writing it all down........... i may make some changes..... and upload the new resample.............