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Section Divine
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Posted : Aug 29, 2004 09:44
http://rain.ifmo.ru/~distel/SD/saturn2.mp3

this one is an effort to produce something beautiful=))

142bpm\128 kbps\6.2 mb
Sektor666
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Posted : Aug 29, 2004 11:22
Ok

too much lows in mix ........

first of all i hear you newbie in psychedelic music production ..... so i will be subjective to make to less happy and make you feel unconfortable with you music coz i want you to success ..... dobre ?


you bass not fit the track coz coda and goa melodies not fit good fit slow bassline , the shit you done as bass brake is stoping all and very weird to dance imho........... tribal stop the groove as well

i think you need goa , fullon or acid bassline for this track

definetly more FX ........

more acid / goa orientated groove not weirdo you have

you will be welcome in expirimental scene soon with this music but not in psy ...... so think about my russian friend .....


BTW i heard somewhere you nickname .....


buttom line

from musical side i don't worry coz you have codas and goa in da head but from groove i afraid ...... even i like this kind of basslines they do not fit the other parts ......

do not smoke when you work on music also good advice ......
Section Divine
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Posted : Aug 29, 2004 12:09
Thanx for the advices. Btw, the main bassline is "kbbb k-bb kbbb k-bb" and it sounds ok like full-on bassline on my speakers. probably it sounds slow coz it's too much lows in it... however, ill work on it more...

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do not smoke when you work on music also good advice ......



definetely=)
Sektor666
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Posted : Aug 29, 2004 12:18
mate i checked it on one of most pro monitors so it not sound fullon bassline .... just you to know .


sometimes speakers shit the sound and make it beautiful while it's not ....

good luck u have music inside brain which is goof imho
DJ Buju
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Posted : Aug 30, 2004 03:00
In a way it reminds me of the old acid music, nice but a bit to Goa style for my taste..
good selection of sounds but and the perfect bpm (140-142)
I would go more progressive in deeper maybe leave the goa sound aside...?!

Keep it grooving..
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