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Filthy Dragon
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Posted : Feb 3, 2012 00:48:48
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Filthy Dragon
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Posted : Feb 3, 2012 04:05
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Hi there, I start that tune about a week now and upload that work in progress to get any ideas, tips or opinions, will undergo some changes to finish and I would be pleased to have any thoughts and advice about technical issues.
If you have time to listen, comments are very welcome, thank you 
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llama.exodus
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Posted : Feb 3, 2012 14:16
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This is intense psychedelic stuff mate, good work!
This exceeds my technical knowledge. I felt it needed some more story telling, somehow. You got some nice synths going on but I felt it more like random expressions more than a sequence of events  . that's just my opinion.
Love that kick/bass drive man. Specially the bass, I can feel it. May I ask what vsti you used for the bass? |
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Filthy Dragon
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Posted : Feb 3, 2012 16:14
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Thanks for your thoughts mate, your comment is very sensible and I feel exactly the same thing, that's actually what I'm looking for and now I want to concentrate on that and get out a nice story.
I am working that tune on nuendo 3 and the Vsti I used for the Bass is VB-1. I also think that the kick might need some correction because I feel that is lost when playing multiple Sounds.
Again man, thanks for your input. |
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Equilizyme
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Posted : Feb 3, 2012 20:46
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Wow, man this is awesomely psychedelic I LOVE IT!! A smile creeped across my face as soon as that shit creeps in at 0:27
you have the vibe 100% man, and i realize this is a work in progress, but I think the section from 1:22 - 2:15 needs something to tie it together, some sort of twisted melody thats tripping out like the rest of the song
your stuff reminds me a bit of ajja, which is awesome, how do you make those strained lead noises at 4:24?
yes, as said above, if you carve out the story a bit more, you will have super super great track!
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Filthy Dragon
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Posted : Feb 8, 2012 11:36
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Hey man, thanks a lot for the feedback, I'm really honored that my tune reminds you ajja's style.
I uploaded this version of the track few days after i start it. I have work it few times after that and it's getting more and more complete. Will up the final when its ready. Those lead noises at 4:24 it''s from NordLead2x tweaking semitones and FM amount, thanks again for the comment, cheers!! |
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TuneUnit
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Posted : Feb 8, 2012 11:54
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love the atmosphere! and the lack of melodic theme kinda gives it a nice hypnotic quality! ambient psytrance 
If music were god, then genres are a lot like religion
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aje
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Posted : Feb 8, 2012 12:35
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Hehe, this reminds me of the good old days of Noma, the way he sounded on the Navigator album, even though that was more minimal and mechanic. Im certainly not a fan of nightmusic, but this is much better than most of the darkpsy I hear at parties, I can relate to this. Well done!
In terms of the mix, the bass seems too strong for the overall balance. Its really nice and fat and juicy, but it swallows up all your work on the leads and synths. So turn up the synths!!
Check out my album: http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/gay-satanic-hippie-tiefenrausch |
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Gedankenexperiment
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Posted : Feb 8, 2012 18:50
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llama.exodus
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Posted : Feb 8, 2012 19:20
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@Gedankenexperiment, he answered that in a previous post:
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On 2012-02-03 16:14, Filthy Dragon wrote:
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I am working that tune on nuendo 3 and the Vsti I used for the Bass is VB-1....
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@Filthy Dragon, Good job with the VB-1 btw, you inspire me to use it again! |
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LotusMatrix
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Posted : Feb 9, 2012 06:23
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That is a mean kick/bass. I think the main area you could work on is the percussion. There is a driving feel to the beat. IMO you want to have the percussion dial in that beat. Play around with emphasizing the stabs, and definently the 2/4 beats. By building up the rhythm and switching up the percussion samples themselves you can really add to the phrasing of each section, which will give it a more organic, live feel. Also, try adding some reverb to those hats/snare. Dynamics wise, this seems like a good track to have the hats duck the kick too. Anyways, I hope this points you in the right direction. Keep up the good work=)
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Filthy Dragon
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Posted : Feb 14, 2012 12:53
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Thank you guys all for the feedz, Equilizyme, TuneUnit, aje, Gedankenexperiment, llama.exodus and LotusMatrix, this is what i was hopping to get from here, nice thoughts, ideas and tips, progress has been made in the piece and when completed will upload it again |
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Filthy Dragon
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Posted : Feb 27, 2012 19:21
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