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Pixel Dust - Walter Bishop (draft)
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Pixel Dust
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Dec 7, 2013 21:13:16
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Dec 8, 2013 01:11
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Hey man.
In the intro i think it would be smoother if you faded in the string synth.
The base is abit thin, kick aswell.
The bellish synth is nice tho. The next synth which comes in is not so interesting you could improve that abit.
Arrangement and progression is good.
All and all i like it.
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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Dec 8, 2013 21:20
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Yes you can work more with smoothening the intro and fatten kick/bass.
It's very hard to tell if everything fits good in this short section because that dependes on an entire track IMO.
Anyway sounds good so far!!..
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Pixel Dust
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Posted : Feb 8, 2014 15:35
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Hi, thanks for listening. I'm almost finishing the track with a lot of improvment. |
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