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Phonkie by DOTOM
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teatako
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 23, 2005 19:21
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hello all, just letting you know i have a new track online @ download.com/dotom
questions, comments, as usual are welcome
peace
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psybratt
Devic
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Posted : Aug 23, 2005 20:42
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dot.om ..
listening to your track .. nice intro pads .. my personal opinion, extend the intro by like 15secs .. i find it too short ..
that "barking/woofing/scratching" sound at 45sec .. it's a turnoff .. try changing it or filtering it ..
you have a great buildup at around 2min and i think the bassline does not go along with the synth lead .. more like, synth line is a different style and bassline is a different style ..
at 3:11 .. really funky/groovy sutff there .. hehe ..
at 4:48 .. nice stuff there .. i like it .. i see the bassline changed .. try using the bassline with the other sytnh before at around 2min with the buildup ..
but good work overall ..
i did not know until know that download.com had a music download page .. hmm ..
peace,
Devic
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