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Phazur - I wanna dance like an android
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Jeller
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Mar 21, 2007 03:28
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Jeller
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Mar 26, 2007 18:07
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hmm no1???? |
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Cosmic Tandav
Trailoka
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Posted : Mar 27, 2007 08:35
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ok bro here we go ..!!!
nice use of atmospheric sounds which is good but could do with some voice sampls to kik it off before the bass and kik starts off..
0:42-the snare and hihat/shaker comes on..i wud sugesst lose the snare or use adiff one..with the shakeror hihat pls change tht aswell it s not sharp enuff..
01:18.good lead comes good work with tht..
around 01:54-u cud use some more efx or a variation of the same lead tht strts around 01:18.
02;06 -nice watery synth till 2:31
a new lead comes on at 2.31...whihcis good but changes the mood of the track from a dark atmospheric to more of tht like a twilight..and i m not a big fan of guitar like leads in dark trance..so in my opninon this is where u ll have to work ..
03.10 there is a sudden break which takes u back to the e begin nig of the older lead tht starts at 01:18--the sudden twistback to the same thing somehow kills the flow..
03.24-again good lead but with could with a lil distortion on it though to make it a lil more sharper..
good tweakin at 04:00..but after the breakdown till the build up you could do with some more effects ..
and good comebeck after the bulid up ..
and i feel the track agian suddenly changes before the end and a sudden abrupt end again ..where you will have to concentrate on ...
but over all i liked the leads ,effects ,bass and kik of the track (very professional)but you could work a lil more on rearranging the story..but great work anywez bro ..good talent ..keep it up ...
Boom!!
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