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Perfect Stranger - A Mosquito Bit my Leg (Dead End Dance Remix)
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shellbound
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Posted : Apr 15, 2013 18:11:14
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psyviz
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Posted : Apr 16, 2013 22:30
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groovy tune
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makus
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Posted : Apr 17, 2013 11:57
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nice one
i do think u need to repeat the straight bass part in the end after triplets part and before the outro
with a huge build up during triplets 
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shellbound
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Posted : Apr 17, 2013 18:50
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makus
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Posted : Apr 17, 2013 19:07
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well okay, arrangement-wise first i would cut the part 5:24-5:53 so the driving full-power triplets start playing sooner.
second i would probably repeat the part that comes first @ 3:03 and put it around 7:25; also i would add some new sounds there from the main theme.
also i would develope the build ups more, this tracks would benefit from more dancefloor-oriented tricks
 
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shellbound
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Posted : Apr 17, 2013 19:34
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ah, gotcha. thanks for the details.
this is definitely something i struggle with, actually making dancefloor-oriented tracks. they start out that way. but then, i don't know if it's due to overlistening or what, i have this tendency to take them into some direction, where they are fun to make and maybe fun to hear at home, but definitely not something i would myself want to hear on the dancefloor. it's like i have this uncontrollable urge to mix things up somehow. maybe too much listening to Mr. Bungle and weird idm permanently warped my precious little mind.
i think i need to try to make some really loopy hard techno to keep myself from doing this. which is really what this one was suppose to be initially (well, loopy tech-trance). but because i wanted to use that idea of the melody he had in the original...well, i ended up going off because of that.
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makus
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Posted : Apr 17, 2013 19:59
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of course its up to u man. i think this one can be pretty much cool dancefloor track with some additional uplifter sounds.
 
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shellbound
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Posted : Apr 17, 2013 22:33
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makus
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Posted : Apr 18, 2013 09:00
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