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Mobius Shrivatsa
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Posted : Apr 21, 2010 17:34
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Hi psyviz, good start! The second version is better, I would work on the hh, play with velocities and introduce different edits of the highs.. maybe you need some bass and fx variation after the builds/weeps, this would make the track more dynamic and boost peoples energy/experience at the right moments =)
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psyviz
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Apr 21, 2010 22:14
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Thanks Mobius Shrivatsa for your time, I will consider changing the hi hats and as i get better at making sweeps i will add them to the track.. I am currently going through a little crises at the moment so all my ambitions are at there lowest, this means i dont have any will at the moment to sit in front of my computer, although i will do my best to lift my spirits in the next few weeks but only time will heal me.. sorry for getting personal but i feel like my world around me is falling apart. anyhoo i will be in touch sometime just wish me luck |
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