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amit_vazana
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Feb 16, 2004 00:38
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Te_nTe
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Feb 16, 2004 22:22
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Good work here what i have to say:
put some reverb on the tribal instrument at the begin.
your kick is good , need some work on it , the problem is in the bassline - it is not powerful enough(on the ultralows freq's).you got only a mid - high from bass - because of that the kick sounds strange.
Also the construction is very strange for progressive , you have some breaks that after them you just putting down the temp then next break you start putting up then down.
try to build more clearly more simple for start.
i miss many effects and mels - add more effects to make a track more interesting.
keep up. |
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amit_vazana
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Feb 17, 2004 06:56
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thx for your good tips
after 12h working i finsh the track.
i remove the left right from the bassline and now its rolling good.
i fix the down up stuff make it whit more power
i put more sounds and made it more enrgy and live, i made vary nice melodis (remove the old one)  and many more fx
the track is difrent so i will upload again and let u listen one more time
once again thx alot for your good tips! its realy helps
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