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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Nov 14, 2012 06:39:29
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Galaxy Machine
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Posted : Nov 14, 2012 13:15
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Nice start but i feel the intro is a bit to long or maybe needs some variations around 1-1:30 min
At 2:40 really nice vibes and cool implemented voicy samples.
The kick could be a bit more present. For me personally a song longer than 8:30 is bit to long. The second intro maybe a bit shorter as well? If i imagine listen to it on the dancefloor it could mean standing around quiet some time - just whipping and moving my arms ofc 
Very cool voice sample style
At 6:50 maybe a bit less after the intro and more progressive buildup? At around 7:40 the sound a bit to quicky maybe or the arp there is to loud/ or more EQ?
These are just my quick impression, overall i like the sound!
 
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Galaxy Machine
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Posted : Nov 14, 2012 13:28
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smoker
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Posted : Nov 14, 2012 22:12
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well done man it sounds greet
and Galaxy i think the kick sounds greet to.
i don't think he need more present.
well done man i like your still
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smoker
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Posted : Nov 14, 2012 22:58
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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Nov 18, 2012 21:55
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@Galaxy Machine: I really appreciate your feedback!, its very usefull to me, I will now work more on those details. Also I like your track but as you said about kick yes I found it about choice of style, I mean I like your kick but not for my track, anyway I still got much work to do on this track.
@smoker: Cool bro! Im glad you liked it!
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Nov 21, 2012 10:26
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Id agree with galaxy machine you could work little on your kick. Little bit sharper would make it sound better.
But kick n base are tight and deliver a good power.
Nice use of sounds and very well progressed.
4.12 lead could be made little more interessting.
4.30 break is cool!. Nice mystical sound introduced.
6.50 the background seem a little bit low, but maybe thats intended.
Good stuff mate!
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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Nov 25, 2012 20:01
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