COMET SHELL
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Posted : Jun 8, 2012 21:12
its down to taste really, i just think everything loses its punch and it has no rhythm. im not saying its wrong, im just saying "i" cant hear anything to comment on.
Patophorm
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Posted : Jun 8, 2012 21:32
Maybe I made kick/bass too loud compared to other sounds? Also there's a drumloop there that I cutoff the lows from and maybe as you said it blurs with the hihats too much. It sounded driving to me so I left it. Maybe I need to fix that =p
COMET SHELL
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Posted : Jun 8, 2012 21:38
no its not just your track, i think the same for most of this fast dark psy.
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Posted : Jun 10, 2012 22:46
Update
*eLliSDee*
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Posted : Jun 10, 2012 23:39
hey.
good work. kick&bass feels very powerful from 1.08min i like it.
dont change ur low end 2 much. sounds good on my monitors. Specially from 4.30min, that sqaure sits good on bass. nice detail.
i understand noise waveform gives feeling of excitement but, when overused, becomes annoying around 5 - 7khz, and imo takes away some presence and depth from other pads.
( i think its ur bit-cruched snare my ears give 2 much attention or rather the noise that start to raise at @ 3.40min)
-anybody else agree on this?
in fact the entire tune is intense. very impressive.
i listen to a lot of tracks in 'the Workshop' . yours is definitely a notch above the norm.
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Posted : Jun 11, 2012 01:38
Thanks for your comment I still need to make a proper intro/outro and maybe stretch some parts to make it a little more danceable (like the one starting in 3:45) About that noise- there's a distorted saw synth, you mean I should EQ it down a bit? I have a tendency to overdo hi eq so it could be, but it seems to sound OK on my monitors @3:40 there's also a crash cymbal raising in the background, maybe it's the reason.
*eLliSDee*
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Posted : Jun 11, 2012 06:32
yeah, im not a fan of that distorted synth. dont take it out on account of me. (im just a snotty brat)
get 2nd opinion.
but listen, its a great track.
please re-post if you plan to work on it more.
i follow you on soundcloud
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Posted : Jun 11, 2012 20:21
Added some stuff and changed the outro and intro a little bit. Also I reduced 4k-6k on master so maybe it's less annoying now. Moving on to a next track because I've got no more ideas for this one anymore
Keep producing more
@3:40 there's also a crash cymbal raising in the background, maybe it's the reason.