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talolard
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Jul 14, 2005 22:47
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talolard
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Jul 17, 2005 18:33
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come on, guys. dont be stingy
  Work like you don't need the money.
Love like you've never been hurt.
Dance like nobody's watching.
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Hayez
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Posted : Jul 18, 2005 09:52
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hey talolard,I think that something is wrong with the mp3, the wmp couldn't play it. I had to take it to wavelab. try to re-encode it.
now about critisizing your ass off , you've made some progress since the last time you're now trying to do something original. the sound fx and ambience are good. adding the guitar was a good idea, but didn't realy work. there is no real communication with the rest of the instruments. the guitar needs some processing and better timing. some parts in the track don't have lead and the story... well...
put more work into it and post again
  "a new art came into my mind which only you can create, the Art of Noises, the logical consequence of your marvelous innovations." Russolo, 1913 |
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