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PaEaN - creepy trippy (darkpsy 156bpm)
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PaEaN
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Posted : Mar 28, 2013 00:55:17
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Mar 31, 2013 22:23
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Hello ..
Must tell you we are all lucky this is unmastered .
Imo the bass is not fit (No air - Sound like 'Hoover' vacuum cleaner) And kik is too thin .
Where the story ? Dont built your music (Or base) On ridiculous random net/Movie's talking pads (Well .. This not an real intro) Will take you to nowhere , (As you can see - You start with a clean , Not yours sample) And then .. What then .. ? Can you get there ? No , (This is what happen when ppl's download samples And use them When they allready masterd But the music (Sound and order) Not enough/Far of being pro .
Dont get wild , Try work And give more attention to each sound and sound !
Cheers ..
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PaEaN
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Posted : Apr 2, 2013 18:54
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ok...
first,thanks for your feedback
second,i'll take serious your opinion about the kick n bass...i know it sounds bad and im working on it.
but really,what's the story??
it's a track mate,it's not a movie or a book
it has a general concept but mainly this has to do with the imagination of the listener.
anyway...thanks again for the advice!!
cheers.... |
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Apr 4, 2013 00:43
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Yes .. Should be a story , Sure .. What do you think will take me in Your blue eyes ? We need a story , All do so This is not somthing new m8 Wake up ! , This is part of the all thing .. The built , The sound , The story ..
Yes .. This a movie , This is a book .. And yes You start the process for us So we can fly away .. To hell To heaven Or what ever (Each one with/To his place) But you are not 'Seduce' us inside So we can turn our imagination ON .
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COMET SHELL
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Apr 4, 2013 10:41
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your tracks dont have storys cardinals cartel, i think you just like putting down peoples efforts.
peaen nice track.
i never really listen to what cardinels cartel has to say about anyones work in here. hes thinks he is some big time pro.
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Apr 4, 2013 11:58
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COMET : THIS IS NOT YOUR TOPIK !!!
And this is not the place to attack me , Here the place : cardinalscartel@walla.com .
99% About me
1% Support to PaEaN
And im realy sorry PaEaN This is all happen here (And may i should ask the mod to be involved - Delete
what need So your topic become representative and serious again) .
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PaEaN
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Posted : Apr 4, 2013 12:19
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dude really...your comment's sounds like "god of trance...judging"
so you're giving place to any kind of comment's with this attitude
a little bit of possitive vibration wouldn't be bad...
i appreciate and be thankfull for any kind of comment's that mentioned on the technicall part
of sound...but i dont think so that any track of psytrance has a story
peace brothers... |
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Apr 4, 2013 12:31
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On 2013-04-04 12:19, PaEaN wrote:
i dont think so that any track of psytrance has a story
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You wrong ..
This weekend try do somthing interesting .. Sea , Wood .. It will come from itself ..
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