sidra
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jul 10, 2011 07:53
new version...we tried to improve on the things suggested.
Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Jul 10, 2011 14:45
Must say i dont like the kik , Not because he is not good , He can be good in another track but imo , Here with this bass together theres somthing strange and your bass & kik (Some how) sound the same so if you use open kik (Mean no sharp) + Open Bass all become dimming and effect on both + other low sounds in - So this is an important point to thinking of , You can have your track much more clean . Try eq sounds more , Try find the right balance at the mix point , Look .. 08:00 to end - Bass is somwhere in the background and all the other high sound + Kik are celebrating , And thats what i have talk about before when there an similar bass kik (At the sound part) + More and many sounds around (When they are combined and integrated together) Then you in a problem - As its sound now . Heard many good and interesting sounds in your music but mello and atmos all are blend together (No air between - Try creat more space in your tunes by playing high and low) . Didt liket the changing bass there at the begining (I mean the way it is - When change so shortly) This is not (Imo) helping (In any way) To your track , I think is more stop streaming then doing somthing helpful , So this is another thing to thinking of . The intro is cool , Realy , But if you make an 50 sec' + Intro try fill it more , Its good and nice and lovely sounds in but infact after 10 sec' when all sound the same (And even if its good - Didt say its bad) Your ear get use to and all start be boring , Man this is 50 Sec + Must be changes & more tools and harmony in . More vol , Changes , Deferent order and rhythmical rhythm here and there at the hh loops .
