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OutpuT - Survival Horror
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OutpuT
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Posted : Apr 3, 2006 19:40
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Hayez
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Posted : Apr 4, 2006 01:59
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much enjoyed, it got some really nice melody although it's dark by nature.
the part from 5:30 is just a long fade out, try to make it a little bit more intresting.
  "a new art came into my mind which only you can create, the Art of Noises, the logical consequence of your marvelous innovations." Russolo, 1913 |
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OutpuT
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Posted : Apr 4, 2006 05:49
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thx for the input man, i'll work on it a bit i didnt want the track to become overproduced so whenever something comes to mind i'll stick it in = ) |
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jivamukti
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Apr 6, 2006 15:34
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IMO the kick is too loud. Heh, the lead that comes in at 3:20 reminds me quite a bit of Infected Mushroom.  Nice pads in the background. I agree with Hayez on that the end should have some stuff going on. Before the above mentioned lead sound there's also rather little going on, so maybe you could add another lead there with another synth. You only have one melodic part in the track. |
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Freeflow
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Apr 7, 2006 03:21
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agree on that the kick is a little too high aswell, but you got percs hitting at same time so it can be a mix of it all that amplifies...
also the kick pan effect is to heavy in my opinion,
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OutpuT
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Posted : Apr 9, 2006 08:21
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thx again im making the changes, im not so good at leads lol so i added in some atmosphere effects sounds pretty good imo lol = )
also jivamukti , my friends say the same thing lol altho i didnt do it intentionaly i still like it tho lol |
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OutpuT
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Posted : Apr 9, 2006 09:40
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