vector_0
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Posted : Aug 6, 2011 02:46
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its not horrible, you've got some good sounds going on. you just need to break it up a bit to make it more song-like. first, you need an intro. second, you need to have some "off" time with that main loop thats in the mid to higher frequencies.
for example, around 2:41, when the beat comes back in, i think you should have that be a bit more dramatic and bring with it a new motif. as it stands now, it sort of just goes back into the same thing as before.
the mix could use a little work, IMO. i think it will sound better as a whole if all the parts get their own place in the mix...right now it feels like they're all in the same spot.
you're getting there though. keep doing what you're doing
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