Pinkadelic @ ciledakniP
IsraTrance Junior Member
Started Topics :
13
Posts :
125
Posted : Nov 28, 2011 03:30
|
Ok.. everything i say here is my personal opinion, and you only post on this forum if you constructive criticism.
The bass, is really overpowering everything, try sidechaining it with some heavy compression. EQ it as well, cut off some of that sub bass.
I can't find the kick. when you make elctronic music, the most important sound in your track is the Kick. if that's lost, the track loses its focus, its Oomph so to speak. So work that out. Sidechain the bass, EQ every single sound in the track which isnt a bassy sound to cut all low frequencies, work the kick's transients with transient designers, eq the kick, NY compression, do whatever you have to do to get that kick out there. right now it's too shy.
Other then that, the track is too repetitive man... you throw everything you have out there too soon. keep some stuff back and introduce them slowly. try adding some more percussion sounds, or maybe some more groove to your track.
Do the following for an instant interesting factor in your sound:
Take all of your patterns that go for 16 bars. now cut them down to 8. Voila!
ok, this is it! i've given you some commercial tips, try them out for a more commercial sound! also, some stuff just burst out with sound with no warning. focus on the dancefloor. how would you feel if you're dancing for 5 minutes, then there's a breakdown, you rest for a while, and out of the blue, BLAMO SHAZAM!!! not cool... so give it a bit more buildup before you break those suomi beats.
Good luck!
  -Soultech/Stampgevaar Records, Parampara Recs
-MSN: marcio_zimerman9@hotmail.com
-myspace: http://www.myspace.com/pinkadelica |
|
|
|
