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Oscillation - Air guitar - Psytrance full onish
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cr1st0
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Posted : Nov 4, 2011 22:20:46
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Nov 4, 2011 22:45
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Daktari
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Posted : Nov 4, 2011 23:15
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you have some nice ideas, but they are badly realized and somehow don't fit together from a melodic point of view - try listening to all melodic parts in your track together and you will know what i mean.. transpose the parts, so that they will fit together and try to come up with a clear and logical order in which to put them; keep going |
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cr1st0
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Posted : Nov 4, 2011 23:35
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cr1st0
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Posted : Nov 5, 2011 06:35
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vipal
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Posted : Nov 6, 2011 05:55
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percussion is really very very off and its almost as if there are two tracks playing indepentdent from eachother. you are pretty productive, good to finish tracks, but maybe take more time for one track. another 5 tracks like this does not bring you much further. but i somehow like the spirit you bring. keep on going.
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cr1st0
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Posted : Nov 6, 2011 16:13
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Ok, i see, but i'm not here just to finish my tracks i'm here to learn and improve my track making, any way i like you music, my hithat sounds a bit ou to me too, i add cuted it in the 9000 frequency now sounds better.
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