orgytime
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Posted : Jul 11, 2010 21:01:59
hey guys,
thats the first track i did on my own, and i wanted to thank you guys, because everything i know, i learned here!
the track took me about 6 months LOL
here it is (the selfmastering destroyed it^^) critics are welcome!
minus
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Posted : Jul 12, 2010 07:49
real nice for first trak bru, clean and crisp, work those percussions more, and at2:13 put full bass,, you other fx and modulations r even smooth, even tho its a little cheesy fullon for my tastes specially 3:50 onwards, but real nice one, keep up good work , make us listen more
bom
orgytime
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Posted : Jul 12, 2010 12:13
hey minus, thx for listening!
what exactly you mean -percussions?
compression, reverb, effects? i thought they are nice lol
i know its cheesy @ 3:50 but i couldnt resist this lovely melody gg.
dj chichke
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Posted : Jul 12, 2010 12:41
i think from 3:50 the track is rocking!
i like the melody. i think you can either develop it little bit more to 8 bars melody.
at 4:11 when you suddenly change the melody it's little bit wired to me. i think you can waive this, or maybe make small break before you change the melody. filter it in or something. make it smoother.
for me the track is little bit confused till 3:20.
in the start everthing is happen too fast. i think you can take things slowlier.
but good sound and good finish to the track.
orgytime
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Posted : Jul 12, 2010 12:52
gg chichke, you nailed it i was a littlebit lazy in the end, maybe ill do this break when the 2nd melody comes in also the advice with a slower process is good, and someone told me so before, the problem is, that things get boring when i making longer bars...
it was hard enough to make those existing bars interesting ^^
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Posted : Jul 12, 2010 18:08
Good track overall. Sounds are mixed well, interesting changes in the bassline, sound design seems well thought out. The ending trancey lead (around 4:45) seems kinda random. Lots of standard breakdown techniques used, did those well, now expand on them and make them your own . Keep it up, look forward to hearing more!
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orgytime
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Posted : Jul 12, 2010 18:13
thx Ascension... yeah i really got lazy in the end... gg
somehow i cant link the updated track, becaus it gots the same name.
you can hear it if you search me in soundcloud.
Alex Roudos
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Posted : Jul 19, 2010 23:18
Very very good! Respect!!!
A friend told me once that the biggest mistake we make is that we believe we live, when in reality we are sleeping in the waiting room of life.
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Posted : Jul 20, 2010 09:12
nice work buddy Ohh yeah. fiddle and boom. Ableton addict :)
Been here since October 14, 2008.
orgytime
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Posted : Jul 20, 2010 11:11
wow thanks for those kind words!
@obelizk i did 2 tracks before, but it worked together with my friend on both, so thats the first track i did 100% on my own www.soundcloud.com/orgytime
(the selfmastering destroyed it^^) critics are welcome!
