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Organic Bubbles
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Kellimus
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Posted : Jan 26, 2009 22:27:16
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dija
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jan 27, 2009 03:48
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Kick and bass could use some work. Some of these fx are really interesting. THey work great as an intro to draw the listener in. However, over 3 minutes into the song I'm still hearing the same fx slightly modulated. One of the reasons I like goa so much is because they always use some leads and melody. I hear none here. I think it would greatly help you to use some music theory to make some chord progressions to help create and release tension. Theres really no tension building or tension releasing in this song. It gets quite boring after about 2 minutes. You need some kind of driving force. You need a theme for the song, something that the listener will always remember. Something that you can play in the beginning as a teaser to catch the ear and then create an insane build and bring it back in during a peak. Playing a familiar catchy sound back to the listener 3-4 times in a song is necessary to create a better groove.
  http://www.youtube.com/user/trawhi (tutorials)
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Kellimus
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Posted : Mar 4, 2009 03:14
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