llama.exodus
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Posted : May 30, 2012 21:18:59
I've been working on this after work and I feel like sharing.
Hope you enjoy the trip and any feedback is appreciated as always.
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Posted : May 31, 2012 00:20
pretty decent work, loved the first intro bit, but kindo boring, as nothing much happening after that,, loved the break , smooth, nice bass after break, but make some bassnote changes to keep it interesting, and pls more percussions,, also many main elements r missing, try using more atmospheric kind of sounds , but like the way you use the small small sounds to build up the flow, but more complex patterns and better percussions with some nice pads and some progressive bassnote changes would really make it come out proper, 5:30 part is totally out of line, dont fit in, but iguess its all experimental, so keep at it, sonding decnt.
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llama.exodus
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Posted : May 31, 2012 11:47
awesome feedback man, thx for taking the time!
As you say it's all experimental but i was hurting for some feedback before going on.
Your ideas refreshed my point of view, i'll keep them in mind.
peace!
dharmatronic
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Posted : May 31, 2012 12:03
nice tunes.. but i also miss some background elements, "wallpapers" if you know wat i mean xD.
in general low freqs are kind of weak. bass is to high and there isn't enough low in your kick.
not sure but if you are recording midi files try to bounce it and then touch low freqs after doing it.
