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opinions please! :p
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elesede
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Posted : Feb 12, 2010 16:26:26
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This is a song I'm working on, I quite like but I think it could improve, any suggestions?
http://www.myspace.com/kibsurya you have to give the player gogear |
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dj chichke
Chichke
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Posted : Feb 12, 2010 16:54
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i like the intro very much, but i think it's too lud compared with the bass and kick, which make the entrance of them soft. the leads are way too loud. i don't like the sounds of the leads too much and i think you should make on the leads more automations. i'm not sure if you did at all...
anyway the arrangement is good and i think after correcting the mix it would be good.
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vipal
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Feb 12, 2010 19:16
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its nice. but its hard for me to comment on snippets.
bass is a bit dull to me. could breath more. play with the envelopes. next to this leads part it should scream more to my taste, |
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