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Karma Konnect
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Posted : Nov 14, 2005 15:22
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aXis
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Posted : Nov 14, 2005 21:16
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WOW!!!!
Super track bro... killler ideas .
Now fr some criticism
Bass can b more interesting
Mostly sound is the same . change the lead.
Hi hats are killer ... but use diffrnt hi hats for a killer change ! Kick is fruity loops !! hehe put more power to it
Otherwse environmnet and space building is killer n so is executuon,
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Posted : Nov 15, 2005 09:23
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@axis its just a demo bro - i have 2 remake the whole track in studio....
and each n every synth is differnt
and its not a fruity kick - its not even on fruity heheh
 Look Around You - EP Out Now on (Planet Ben records)
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rübe und luki
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Posted : Nov 16, 2005 14:22
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Hi Psystar
I like the atmosphere you create a lot. It's a simple pad, but heck, it does it's job very fine. 
The atmosphere is really great! It feels "foggy". I guess this is the result of the pad(slow)/bass-kick(fast) contrast.. very nice, at least for me it works great.
I don't think that you should make your bass "more interesting". That way the bass is assisting your song perfectly. But, I'm missing some more punch/drive (you know; you have to feel it in the stomach, hehehe). Try to better separate the single instruments (EQ).
Wow, that was a nice journey. Great Song.
best regards,
rübe und luki |
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Mike A
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Posted : Nov 16, 2005 16:46
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Good track and great atmosphere but there are some points for improvement.
Mostly the eq work on the bottom end of the track, the kick & bass. Bass has way too much sub in it and the kick has almost none. This is no way to move people. Gotta have it balanced.
Percussions? I barely hear them. Turn them up! It has to be heard, as it is a very important section of the groove.
I'm lacking some small breaks and little kick&bass games, to give it some flow instead of constant 4/4 groove.
Another problem is the leads - some of them are not powerful and are almost unheard because of the background sounds (which are very good actually).
That's it I think..
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Karma Konnect
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Posted : Nov 17, 2005 00:01
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On 2005-11-16 14:22, rübe und luki wrote:
Hi Psystar
I like the atmosphere you create a lot. It's a simple pad, but heck, it does it's job very fine.
The atmosphere is really great! It feels "foggy". I guess this is the result of the pad(slow)/bass-kick(fast) contrast.. very nice, at least for me it works great.
I don't think that you should make your bass "more interesting". That way the bass is assisting your song perfectly. But, I'm missing some more punch/drive (you know; you have to feel it in the stomach, hehehe). Try to better separate the single instruments (EQ).
Wow, that was a nice journey. Great Song.
best regards,
rübe und luki
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Look Around You - EP Out Now on (Planet Ben records)
http://soundcloud.com/karmakonnect |
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Karma Konnect
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Posted : Nov 17, 2005 00:02
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On 2005-11-16 16:46, Mike A wrote:
Good track and great atmosphere but there are some points for improvement.
Mostly the eq work on the bottom end of the track, the kick & bass. Bass has way too much sub in it and the kick has almost none. This is no way to move people. Gotta have it balanced.
Percussions? I barely hear them. Turn them up! It has to be heard, as it is a very important section of the groove.
I'm lacking some small breaks and little kick&bass games, to give it some flow instead of constant 4/4 groove.
Another problem is the leads - some of them are not powerful and are almost unheard because of the background sounds (which are very good actually).
That's it I think..
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@ mike & rubi
Thanks guys i really appericiate the views - & will work on it Look Around You - EP Out Now on (Planet Ben records)
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solco
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Posted : Nov 17, 2005 01:09
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good trance i like that!
thanks *PsYsTaR* ! |
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