Oliveira
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Posted : Feb 14, 2011 21:51
Thanks for the nice words guys
Plasmorh
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Posted : Feb 15, 2011 22:36
niceeeeee
u reached the spot ahah
I want a spare brain.... or 2.
stardust2013USP
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Posted : Feb 16, 2011 14:48
Hi there,
I don't listen to this type of music usually, but looking for some fresh music I decided to give it a listen due to the resonance I felt with the name of the track I must say I'm glad I've heard it, it altered my DNA in a way that I feel better now, thanks! It was a nice journey with good emotions. keep this energy in your heart and in your music and look further for the light. bom!
Freeflow
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Posted : Feb 16, 2011 20:00
Nice intro, Very cool sounds, good Tension you build up and
Sweet atmosphere. good use of reverb Heavy kick and bass section, and cool transition at 1:23
I like how you modulate the sounds, and its very forest friendly track, still on the progressive side with melodic elements.
Good Groove
Weak points, The lead sounds could be a little higher, especially the sound at 4:32, or at least more reverb and little louder, and you can soak us in to the atmosphere more. And you lose little focus in the ending.
I think it should keep build steady, that "knaprika"(4:32)sound should keep going and you could really up the tension with it, Also you change the melody for the ending instead of build on the hypnotic lead (4:32) and add melody or complement on top of it...
and at 6:20 there is a high sound that you really should build more on, to make the climax start going, add it ontop as a lead line and just drive more..
6:51 you dont really know where you want to go, that sound dont belong there, it kills the flow...
All and all very nice potential, real sweet track.
But get some focus on the leads and if this means you have to make the track longer to make room for both section, do it
Hope i wasnt to confusing, but main thing i wanted to say is, more volume on the sweet leads, and keep the first main lead section going and evolve, and make the second main lead section the big climax and evolve the sound at 6:20 to become a dominant lead ontop of the rest
