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ok take this darker and completely revamped check it
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FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 9, 2005 22:28
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FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 9, 2005 22:45
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sorry my mp3 wasnt right ill fix it and post it |
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FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 9, 2005 23:23
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ok sound is go! please have a listen |
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fregle
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Posted : Oct 11, 2005 02:10
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Nice one... It got me going, but again i have to say that i would never spin it, too much stuff is like this but better (and i don't spin full-on anyway, but hey, there u have it  )... U'll have to find ur own sound or get a lot better at this stuff, but u are very able, i can hear that. |
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fregle
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Posted : Oct 11, 2005 02:12
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oh yeah, that melody in the last 1,5-2 minutes caught me by surprise, where have u been hiding that That's the way it should be going... |
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FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 11, 2005 06:28
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thats more what im going for it kinda took me by surprise as well. so im redoing the middle section as far as melodies and bassline and i just added some nice delayed lofi pops and click for filling and psychedelia im just really stumped in the middle thanks for the comment maybe thats why im not liking the middle too generic thanks ill have a new one up soon if you could check back when i do id love to hear what you thought of the changes. |
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Methodic Marble
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Posted : Oct 11, 2005 16:45
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Cool intro... love the snare .the first lead is as a sound +- a little strange.
when cames the 2 lead the sound is a little bitte empty, need to fill it more(maybe some effect´s).5:20 is the shit nice lead ....
drastic pass in the bass cool.
in general it´s a good track but i think some sound´s are a little bit "primitive"?don´t know if it´s the right word...
what´s is the software that you use, and pulg ins ? need more alive sound´s
but good ideas man.
my truly opinion
keep on doing it....
i´ve updated my topic with 2 song´s
love to heard from U.
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FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 11, 2005 18:48
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im tryin to go to logic right now as soon as i am semi comfortable i will have more synth and effects possibilities theres only so much you can do with reasons effects units they arent bad but they are real basic. but im still writing in reason till i can get able in logic or another program
thanks its nice to hear it in words when i hear it i cant think of what is the problem but i have the feeling something isnt right. |
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Methodic Marble
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Posted : Oct 11, 2005 23:33
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Facehead - if you are working with reason ,my advice is that you work with cubase and rewired reason,then you can use reason and also many plug ins that you would use in logic.
In fact reason is a very good software.many professional producers use it, so you just have to deveop a little more your skill´s .How?
Hours,day´s , weak´s,mounth´s, in reason/cubase. 
Hasta
still like to hear your opinion on my trackxs
see ya till next music or topic.
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Terrafractyl
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Posted : Oct 12, 2005 05:27
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sounds cool man!
really like the breakdown at 2:20ish, and the end rocks:good:
maybe there could be a little more variation in some of the lead parts, I heartily agree with Methodic Marble about rewiring reason I remember when I did that for the first time and my tracks instantly SOUNDED better and louder, as the reaon mixer does some horrible things(some kind of internal limiter(?))
keep up the good work |
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FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 12, 2005 18:52
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ya i never understood wht theyd make it output so quiet thanks |
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Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Oct 12, 2005 22:43
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OK, Here we go....
Nice Intro, i like nice slow intros!
Good Kick and Bassline, gets straight down to business! 
Good break and good intro to the lead...Nice....
Good Fxs and build up....Super Lead at 2.45 but as it goes on, try and put some atmosphere.
Dude, where do you get your samples from? Send me a PM
Good break with the voice sample at 4.40. I love the leads!  and good work on the bassline again.
You're getting better with each track!
Good Luck and don't forget that PM about the samples!!!
Hope i helped...
 Rather than feeling that you're about to have the rug pulled from under you, let me teach you how to dance on a flying carpet |
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