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Ohm Mind - Mystic Life - Goa Trance Oldskool - 143 BPM
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ohm mind
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Mar 27, 2013 17:13:49
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ohm mind
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Mar 31, 2013 03:19
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Nobody have a advice of a opinion? 
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Oni Katsu
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Posted : Mar 31, 2013 10:52
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Well, for starters, personally, the kick is oldschool and all.
But personally it doesn't cover enough frequencies for modern music in my ears.
The easy way would be to just hipass it from 55hz and down, and add a layer with sub, then lowpass it down to 55hz as well. Just experiment with that.
And the bass is nice! it just needs that little extra as well. If i'm not mistaken it sounds very buzzy without lowpass right?
Try disabling all plugins, resculpt it and enable the plugins again  I like the texture of this track so i'd only do minor changes.
the leads are pretty cool as well. I'd let them stay that way they are. Cool use of flangers on the sweeps btw
Sorry nobody actually gave you any feedback before me, but this forum tends to be that way from time to time.
it seems we gain a certain audience by the time here, and if that audience isn't online, well you know the drill.
Percussion is OK as well for this. BTW!
Also just, i feel like the track could be about two notes lower, if you CAN change that very easily i'd ive it a shot. That pitch difference goes for the kickdrum as well
C ya!
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Mar 31, 2013 11:20
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i like the kik man.. but like oni said sounding a lil thin
kool acid leads after 2.30... i just love playing with em and make them talk
that r2d2 kinda sound is somewhat too present or how to say.. hmm in ur face in the mix with other sounds i think
hats work is kool but my ear was missing more perc/groove elements.. and vocal sample from healing magic no? i love that track..
also just my opinion.. i think when the melodies are playing you can put in a phased lead or atmos of some sort to give that up and down movement.. it'll be kool... all the best dude.. have fun!
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ohm mind
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Mar 31, 2013 19:13
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Thanks for reply guys it's good for me
I try your advice and tricks for more better sound ! I know it's sound sometimes a little too thin I try my best on the mix but it's still my problem for now
Good idea for the effect flanger etc ...
I will try your little extra also , maybe it's sound better .
Thanks also jeeboomba I notice that !
I have a lot of other track if you have time for give me your opinion I take
thanks a lot |
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