jeeboomba
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Posted : Jan 6, 2014 17:45
good kb combo.. straight up goa.. melodies sounding cool and egyptian vibe.. i feel u can work on ur leads more.. a bit too plain imo.. if u wudnt mind, here's a track from a experimental goa artist called ka-sol...
.. i love the leads and use of noises in this track here.. keep working man.. cheers.. and nice adventures in the new year..
P.S : next time remember to take out the s from https:// in ur soundcloud link... for embeding the track..
re-arrange what you thought was real
ohm mind
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Posted : Jan 16, 2014 20:51
Thanks for the comment and advice mate
It's cool , I keep that
Jèr
iCon
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Posted : Jan 19, 2014 17:30
knocz
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Posted : Jan 21, 2014 00:36
Nice man! I could give you a whole bunch of different tips, but I'll just ruin the vibe and put it too modern.. and this track doesn't need any of me
However, you could still enhance the composition side: you have nice melodies and sections, but you could deviate from them in more notes, say every bunch of notes(say every prime number bar e gets a change) and more on the rhythms, bringing in more changes like having something that's plaing go to a slower rhythm before something slower comes in, or even the opposite to have a bigget impact.
Also, the last buildup could have a lot more snare building up, it be expecting a more dramatic entrance
But, please don't take my word for it, it's good and just do what you think is best Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz
ohm mind
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Posted : Jan 29, 2014 14:51
Thanks for the answer and the tips guys it's awesome for me ! ! !
Jèr
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Posted : Feb 11, 2014 09:18
really great vibe you've got going on getting that oldskool vibe is something I've been trying to do for awhile but you nailed it
http://soundcloud.com/dj-demensha
ohm mind
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Posted : Feb 11, 2014 14:04
