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Odyssey and Dellinca demos
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Bunker Jack
Bunker Jack
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Posted : Feb 23, 2006 20:47
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index
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Feb 24, 2006 16:54
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i ve heared the first track.
Not bad at all as a start idea.
Minimal like made full on with kickbass,lead,and highats.
So it was easy for a nice production
But:
there is no depth inside,like sfx,flowing melodies etc... in general i think there are missing elements that could make it more interesting.
Sorry my man but i think u should try more!
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Feb 25, 2006 08:31
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i heard the first track also and i must agree with index!
there isnt much depth in the track its to simple more fx and some extra melodies would add alot to make the track interesting and flowting!
overall it has a nice basis with a killer lead and a tight kick/bass combo!
work it more and it will be a killargh!
orange
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Methodic Marble
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Posted : Feb 25, 2006 09:39
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i agree ....i was expecting mutch better......
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Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Feb 25, 2006 13:21
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Goadellinca - you have lots of work ahead of you. you need more SOUNDS inside of the body of the track.
virtually you have almost nothing until 1:30, thats lots of empty time. evolve it mate. you can "compress" your 2:40 minutes to 1:30 and it will sound better. good luck 
personally i have those 1200mics kicks, never use em.
Music mp3 - this is better then the other, but still almost no FX work. try to change the beat a little, not only the melodies.
ive noticed that u use short notes of the bassline, if u write them longer the sound will be much more hearable.
good luck
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