fractal fields
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Posted : Nov 20, 2010 00:20:15
140Bpm C key
Working on this.
I'd like know what you think... what more to put in and what to fix...
working on in ear headphones atm.
Appreciate all input.
Nomad Moon
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Posted : Nov 26, 2010 16:54
i kinda like the song, but you shouldn't use that vocal sample that many times, and make different breaks, they sound all the same,it's a nice try keep up!!!
loki
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Posted : Nov 28, 2010 06:56
solid groove.
percussion needs some work, perhaps a little more reverb to match with the spaciness of the pads and sounds. i'd use more flourishes, too, instead of instantly forming a 1-bar repeating pattern off the bat. (i.e. introduce something with a rudiment and a shitload of delay, then in the next 16-bar section use the same drums without the delay to lay down a groove. used a lot by zenon, bio-sine, even iono artists...)
also, that pad that's going around the 3min mark, why does it mute out so suddenly? rebounce it! keep the tail. it's a good sound.
but, did i mention solid groove? that bassline eats my whole room right up, in a good way, and clear as day in the mix. for headphones? fuck! gj
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elastic_plastic
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Posted : Nov 30, 2010 14:07
ur track actually made me
very nice sounds.... def need a snare in there wid some variation with perucussion and need a nice arp prbbly a 303 sound which forms the story to the track.
i jus luv the bass... what vst is it? really clean and crisp bass!!!
daark
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Posted : Nov 30, 2010 19:50
nice
mids are way down i don't like them anyway
bass has problem in volume sustain needs to be raised you hear taaa quite and tata louder. whatever the reason is
http://soundcloud.com/magimix-1/chilling-forest-whispers Wierd shit happens :)
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Posted : Dec 1, 2010 10:57
First take this 'Another dimension' And the 'Eee' Voice out of the track imo its more annoying and bother the listeners ears then helping to the development of the track , It make it be sound stuck and i think its kind of torture . Try use your own voice pads you will find it much more helpful and interesting . Track sound nice and stable but as the gentlemans here have said you need more action in (In all the points , Places and parameters in your track) to make and bring him be more full and rich with many sounds in . Try play with the bass note , Deferents brakes as nomad moon said (You need more ideas in kind of naked and boring now) . More living to the hh + Deferent loops . More atmos and mello's , Leads and those . Fill the intro .
Good luck ..
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Posted : Dec 2, 2010 04:11
I enjoyed this..id say keep the another dimension phrase but less repetition or maybe a differnt phrase...just an idea
