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Obtaining Logic
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Daniel Eng
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Feb 5, 2012 15:55:23
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psyviz
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Posted : Feb 5, 2012 22:27
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its good  +1
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Daniel Eng
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Feb 6, 2012 20:58
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TuneUnit
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Posted : Feb 6, 2012 23:13
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Very nice  it has some very good qualitys!!!
 If music were god, then genres are a lot like religion
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Daniel Eng
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Posted : Feb 8, 2012 22:26
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Larrikin
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Posted : Feb 9, 2012 02:54
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LotusMatrix
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Posted : Feb 9, 2012 05:48
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I really like this one. It definently has a lot of character,nice phrasing, and flow. I think the main areas I'd suggest working on would be on your leads, and lower range stab synths. Don't be afraid to add some EQ in the 80-400hz range (Try different high/low Q areas to hone in on the fundamental, or first harmonic) to add some body to these sounds. Also, specifically to your melodies, try playing with adding/removing reverb/delay on the fly. It seems like you're comfortable with doing this stuff with stabs, but tend to shy away from it when the melody gets busy, which is pretty natural. One last thing, try modulating these leads slowly with a little chorus, flanger, or patch mod matrix to make it evolve. Really though, this stuff sounds great. I'm just point you to areas to explore. Keep it up!
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Daniel Eng
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Feb 10, 2012 20:53
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On 2012-02-09 02:54, Larrikin wrote:
Fun track mate. Nice bounce.
Maybe have the middle section at the end rather then having the "driving" part in the middle .. my 2c
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Thanks alot for the feedback
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Daniel Eng
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Feb 10, 2012 20:54
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On 2012-02-09 05:48, LotusMatrix wrote:
I really like this one. It definently has a lot of character,nice phrasing, and flow. I think the main areas I'd suggest working on would be on your leads, and lower range stab synths. Don't be afraid to add some EQ in the 80-400hz range (Try different high/low Q areas to hone in on the fundamental, or first harmonic) to add some body to these sounds. Also, specifically to your melodies, try playing with adding/removing reverb/delay on the fly. It seems like you're comfortable with doing this stuff with stabs, but tend to shy away from it when the melody gets busy, which is pretty natural. One last thing, try modulating these leads slowly with a little chorus, flanger, or patch mod matrix to make it evolve. Really though, this stuff sounds great. I'm just point you to areas to explore. Keep it up!
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Thanks man, you are totaly right. Thanks so much for the feedback!
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