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Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Feb 6, 2006 17:19
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Hello All,
This is my second track, its called Jah Rastafari.
http://www.soundclick.com/wakantanka
Can someone please listen and give me some feedback?
Thanks!!
bharath.
  Rather than feeling that you're about to have the rug pulled from under you, let me teach you how to dance on a flying carpet |
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Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Feb 8, 2006 12:03
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Comon peoples, No one??? 
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Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Feb 9, 2006 12:40
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ok then, maybe the next one!
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illusions
Erebus
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Posted : Feb 10, 2006 11:35
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Whats going on Bharath,
Will give this a listen this weekend. I'm sure things are sounding much better now 
Keep it going! |
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Feb 10, 2006 12:12
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Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Feb 10, 2006 12:35
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Woo-HOO, atleast am getting replies now!! 
Hey Cardinals, howz it man?
the link's working for me. anyway, can you please try the link below. Am at work now so cant upload onto sendit.
here is the other link.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=418414
Thanks once again 
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Feb 10, 2006 13:10
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cant ..
My problem is that my monitors are in the other
computer (My work machine) So i cant hear it
from the site at all (Must past the stuff to there)
I will wait for the yousendit man ..
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Feb 14, 2006 05:29
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Hola man ..
Nice idea .. Good leads , Quality , Backround synth (But i will change it a littel maybe cause its looks abit the same in all over the first 3 min' but fine if that is your way and what u try to say there in the back of this story . Put some other more maybe to open it in
those sec' and invigorat the all cover) . Haha .. Man
nice pad 03:27 (Need eq at this part - Not to much ,
slightly) . Nice singing (By this woman in the back there) . Nice basskik but i would make them louder maybe but this is me (1-2 gain up) . nice games and
play in all over the track all is happy jumping and bidder .. Thats sound cool .
Overal nice track !
I think 1-2-3 carvings in the air there will make it
defferent and much better .. Try it ! Kill us ...
Boom Yoko
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Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Feb 14, 2006 12:06
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Thanks for replying Yoko!
I need to work little more on this track i think. Maybe put a few more sounds, not too much!
Anyone else?
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illusions
Erebus
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Posted : Feb 14, 2006 16:14
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Whats happening Bharath ?
Sounding much better now man Im liking the groove you got. Breaks in all the right places.
Try adding some more distortion to your bass, maybe add a little bit more top end to bring it out more in the mix.
Some of the leads stay the same for too long - add some fx. Dont be afraid of automation Its your friend.
Can't wait to hear some more man.
Good work. |
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