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Freeto
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Posted : Jul 1, 2010 16:16:46
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jonsta
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Posted : Jul 1, 2010 19:40
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olha 1 tuga 
First thing I noticed was the bass taking way too much space. Either turn it's volume down or put the other sounds volume a bit higher.
Carlos paredes guitar sample was a nice idea, kudos to that! I think your track would benefit a lot if the bass rhythm was following the guitar better instead of just going KbbbKbbb or KbbKbb all the time.
The voice sample at around ~3:45 doesn't fit too well in the track IMO.
The track is nice, but I feel like it's too repetitive and there could be a lot more going on. I liked the phased / flanged glitchy elements but there's not too much after the guitar part that keeps me interested in listening the rest of the track. There is no crescendo to a 'peak' with a crazy amalgamation of sounds at any part of the track which works so well with darkpsy.
Basically it feels like it is just a solid base to make a good track, but it is missing a lot of elements to diferenciate it from other producers tracks (apart from the guitar of course).
Keep it up! I'll stay tuned for your next projects  |
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Freeto
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Posted : Jul 1, 2010 22:29
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On 2010-07-01 19:40, jonsta wrote:
olha 1 tuga
First thing I noticed was the bass taking way too much space. Either turn it's volume down or put the other sounds volume a bit higher.
Carlos paredes guitar sample was a nice idea, kudos to that! I think your track would benefit a lot if the bass rhythm was following the guitar better instead of just going KbbbKbbb or KbbKbb all the time.
The voice sample at around ~3:45 doesn't fit too well in the track IMO.
The track is nice, but I feel like it's too repetitive and there could be a lot more going on. I liked the phased / flanged glitchy elements but there's not too much after the guitar part that keeps me interested in listening the rest of the track. There is no crescendo to a 'peak' with a crazy amalgamation of sounds at any part of the track which works so well with darkpsy.
Basically it feels like it is just a solid base to make a good track, but it is missing a lot of elements to diferenciate it from other producers tracks (apart from the guitar of course).
Keep it up! I'll stay tuned for your next projects
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Primeiro feedback de um tuga Muito bem! 
The bass problem i think its because the quality of the software, at least I tried to harmonize it the most I could, with this result.. if I turn the bass a little down I cant almost hear it in the peak of the music.
I dont like the voice at 3:45 either, im still searching for another portuguese voice that fits...
Im still working in the part after the guitar, where it looses a bit, trying to make the sound go up untill the break...
The crescento and the crazy amalgamations.... Well, I still have a lot to learn
thank you for the tips
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jonsta
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Posted : Jul 2, 2010 00:14
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If you can't hear the bass when you turn it's volume down you are having mixing problems. I think the bass is clipping in some parts too.
Remove the unwanted frequencies with some EQ.
Btw which is the vst you are using for the bass? |
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Freeto
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Posted : Jul 2, 2010 00:16
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Freeto
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Posted : Jul 3, 2010 16:24
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Hi, allready made some minor changes in the track, but i really like it better now so i would like to hear the opinion from the people here....
this time the music is the last in the player because myspace is not allowing to put it up....
Thanks
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