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krobinro
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Posted : Aug 25, 2009 06:50:24
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I'm quite the amateur when it comes to producing music, so feel free to laugh at my inexperience and lack of technological know-how!
This short unfinished track is quite weird, has terrible transitions, and lacks atmosphere, but bear with it . . i'm mostly looking for technical criticism at this point.
http://www.sendspace.com/file/cyyncn
Things I'm concerned about:
1) bass in general. . especially the timing and fluidity of the full-on. I'm using ping-pong delay on the full-on part to get the sound to meld. Is this bad?
2) some general stuff . . Is it bad to put a compressor on the master channel? reverb on the master channel?
3) i should have more questions, but don't know where to begin
Any help would be much appreciated!
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Pinkadelic @ ciledakniP
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Posted : Aug 25, 2009 09:50
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if you use the reverb as a mastering instrument, put it on the master channel, but bad idea to make it a strong reverb..
as for the compressor, it's a good idea to put it in the master, AFTER you complete the mix.
too empty track, most starting producers have this problem, the track is too empty.
i dunno, i'm too sleepy now to think about it too much, but i'll leave another comment soon.
Pink
 -Soultech/Stampgevaar Records, Parampara Recs
-MSN: marcio_zimerman9@hotmail.com
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*eLliSDee*
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Posted : Aug 25, 2009 10:53
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41mb file.
i have a internet download limit per month.
please make MP3 with high bitrate.
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krobinro
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Posted : Aug 25, 2009 15:08
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*eLliSDee*
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Posted : Aug 25, 2009 16:04
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your kick and bass sounds fine. nice solid center.
The reverb is very overpowering, it almost makes the kick & bass disappear at times.
rather use reverb on separate channels where u want create space for a specific group or sound. do not use reverb on everything.
i put a compressor on the master but only use it to listen if thinks will glue. rather leave it until the track is complete for mastering.
nice build-up.
keep it rockin
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tjaal
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 28, 2009 04:36
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hey i liked it! its weird but in a nice way
some freak chords ketamine vibe 
nice bassline
just keep it up |
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Perma Fry
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Posted : Sep 1, 2009 11:59
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Downloading....
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Perma Fry
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Posted : Sep 1, 2009 13:33
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Hi,
I liked your track a lot from 1:53
Bassline at the end sounds like artifakt 
i would only change the claps, im not a huge fan, thts just me. Try snares, troumbines...
Abt kick and bass- I could a small tail in the kick in the start of the track. Easy to fix by simple zoom in and resizing.
Your bassline is sweet
G'luck
Bom
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krobinro
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Posted : Sep 5, 2009 02:22
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Hey all,
Thanks a lot for all the feedback . . . I really appreciate it!
I updated the track and pushed it in a new direction with more embellishment.
Here's the link:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/6x2vn9
Psytrance pwns!
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