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Nocturnal Trancist
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Psybro
IsraTrance Senior Member
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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 00:35:27
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psyviz
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 12:59
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Hi man .... Sounds good i am not into dark psy so much but i did think you gave it a very good try... Personaly i think you can still do a lot better i say this in a good way because you do try space things out and thats good  as for dark psy and this track i think you need a few more effects in a few places a wind down or kind a few more glitchy build ups too .... I hope my critics are taken well and dont think you doing bad to me you are doing very good keep it UP |
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ierofante
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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 14:13
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Are you kidding? Is this a song?
 Fire Walk With Me |
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ierofante
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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 14:53
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It is extremely poor in composition and variety... And the sound of kick and bass, well... It is not there. Sorry man
Fire Walk With Me |
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UVBlast
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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 22:27
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Hi,
The track sounds the same since the beginning until the end.
You need to have more variations and sounds during the track, in my opinion.
Also need to improve the mixing.
Don't give up, though.
Cheers! |
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 23:13
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Psybro .. The truth .. (And im always trying be attached to the truth) This is very bad work m8 !
For me you break rule no1 , The most important thing - You let me think to much here when i just want to jump/Dive inside , But you dont let me .. So intro start nice (+More atmos around will sure be nicer but ok ..) And then intro stop .. And .. Where the bass and kik ? Where .. ? Maybe they are there (Maybe ..) But i cant hear them im sorry . Realy expect to somthing more serious but i disappointed .
You have good ideas .. But you use them to much/Often in/Over the track (Again and again - And in all your sound , Mean over use of sounds , When sure some are great but hearing them till they made a 'Hole in the head' Somt times make the inverse of the realy thing you want to get .
Work on your bass , By now needs to be improved alot . More Hh loops games (I hear here 'Sprinklers' on automatic pilot when tis is bother/Annoying the ears) .
You have good drive .. And i can hear your vision ,
You just have to learn more about technique and sound .
Keep working ..
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Psybro
IsraTrance Senior Member
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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 23:54
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Oct 12, 2011 23:58
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P.s : Sorry i forgot few important thing's and i want help you more ..
Eq of sounds , Mix (Each sound , To be fit inside your track + All together - Later) . More compressores work , Harmony of tools - More vsts work , Never limit yourself .. (In my tracks
i open minimum 120 channels) Dont be afraid , 'Run' With your imagination ..
Your track sound now like a 'Glider' With no motor ,
So with no real 'Win ..' around who carry you , You will crush on/Into the rocks ..
try concentrate more with the all down area , Dont let your Bass & Kik be sound 'Naked' .
Cheers ..
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Oct 13, 2011 00:18
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On 2011-10-12 23:54, Psybro wrote:
does anyone give positive criticisms anymore?
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Psybro .. THIS IS an positive criticism (You dont know how much ..
I think when time will come you will ..)
Take care
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faxinadu
Faxi Nadu / Elmooht
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Posted : Oct 13, 2011 01:24
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i agree with some comments here, want to add that the ride cymbal is really over the other things in the mix, unpleasent to the ear.
the drive is kinda nice in spots but like mentioned there is not much story here
The Way Back
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ierofante
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Posted : Oct 13, 2011 11:38
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How long have you been making music?
Fire Walk With Me |
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psyviz
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 13, 2011 15:06
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@Psybro we are really trying to help some things might be a little to hard to hear at first.... trust me shake it of and remember that you will and ARE most applicable of doing better I got some upsetting critics the other day about a song of mine being to comercial or already done by many... i took it badly the first few day´s but after i thought about it, after cooling down and having a break for a week i realized that i was actually onto somthing good i had achived one of my main goals... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK MAN its not Shit just needs a little work m8 maybe these critics will help you in your future Productions if you feel unespired just take a break for a couple of days relax and you will be able to think of more positive critics out of all of these
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