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Hypnotist
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Posted : Dec 28, 2013 18:52:35
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supergroover
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Posted : Jan 3, 2014 10:28
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Hi there!
You have some good stuff going on. But.. I see improvement 
Kick n bass: Sounds good. Maybe roll of a little on the low part of the the bass. Shelf eq, just a few db below say 50-70. Although that might not be necesarry (listening on crappy speakers here), so check with released material if it has the same volume in the lows.
I do feel the bass could be a bit more aggressive by adding some (parallel) distortion. That would also make it a bit more energetic.
Percussion: it is a matter of taste but I think the snare could use a bit more meat. Maybe add a short burst of white noise underneath. Also experiment with the length of the snare to see if the groove improves.
Overal there is not much percussion going on. It could make it groovier if you add some hihats. For example one with low volume that falls on the kick or one that you hear every 16th note. Maybe sidechained to the kick.
In general I'd also add lots of sounds. It is very minimal at the moment. Add some pointers: sounds that show you the structure of the track. Sounds that fade in before a new part for example.
Good luck!
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Hypnotist
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Posted : Jan 10, 2014 15:03
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Hi 
Sorry fort the delay (because of vacation)
Thanks for the really nice improvement tips.
IŽll try to improve my percussions and hihats.
I hope i can make them more groovier.
Hopefully it works haha
But i try it
Thanks man
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