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No Logic - Requiem For a Nightmare - 146bpm
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no_logic
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Posted : Dec 5, 2010 15:42:18
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Plasmorh
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Dec 5, 2010 22:47
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@ 3.04.. the break.... put a kick on top of the crash....
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  I want a spare brain.... or 2. |
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no_logic
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Posted : Dec 6, 2010 13:41
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and how about music? ;] |
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elastic_plastic
Re-Boot
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Posted : Dec 6, 2010 16:29
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not really my style of music but is got a good flow and good sounds. i jus dont like the snare and jus control the highs of the snare and the high hats dey r hurtin the ear...
i keep repeatin over and over tht controlling the overall highs of the track. mayb its jus me coz it really annoys the shit out of me...
overall good music and good flow and everythin fits in well. Keep up the good work brotha!! |
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Upavas
Upavas
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Posted : Dec 6, 2010 21:56
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Nice intro,
needs more variations and automation, sounds a bit static overall, more evolving and progressing (changing) sounds needed. Also more buildup in the break is needed. After the break some nice mello that could be also automated more(cutoff+maybe an lfo) ... try to make it less static. Also needs more (evolving and changing) percussion elements.
as far as the snare is concerned, I would automate it more, but make sure you eq out the painful frequencies! Also, vary the bass more!
You're definitely onto something here. Would be nice to hear the updates.
Upavas - Here And Now (Sangoma Rec.) new EP out Oct.29th, get it here:
http://timecode.bandcamp.com
http://upavas.com
http://soundcloud.com/upavas-1/ |
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Dec 8, 2010 09:53
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The only nightmare here is the bad mix . First thing to do : Take those high hh down (Vol) Its cover the all track , Then you will hear whats going in and what more sound are need) Also cut the downs of the hh let them be more stable and sharp . More 'Warming' sounds and power by compressors for the all down area - Bass and kik .
Can be an real nice track , Add more sounds for an more action in ..
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elektrik boy
Elektrik Boy
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Posted : Dec 8, 2010 10:17
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pretty good track indeed. maybe some adjusments. some sounds (hh maybe sounds a bit hard) |
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no_logic
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Posted : Dec 8, 2010 22:33
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Thank You guys for all critics and advices, I'm still learnig ;]
I have no studio or monitors and I'm working on a bad 5.1 ss from home cinema ;/ |
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Cosmic Tandav
Trailoka
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Posted : Dec 9, 2010 14:28
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nice track ..i like the sounds efx and the over all feel of the track ..the re arrangment of the melody is also nice...but need an over all clean up ,eqing at certain parts ...
and yes the hats are too harsh tone em down lil bit ...
g luck !!
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