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No Fire! -- Newest track I've put online
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Obelizk
Amoeba
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Posted : Nov 5, 2010 07:01:43
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wizanda
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Posted : Nov 5, 2010 14:11
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Very impressed, nice journey! 
Would like to hear more organics in the bass, slight res and cut adjustments per note, so its not just static; so it then matches the amount of feeling in the rest of the track. 
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Wizack Twizack
Wizack Twizack
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Posted : Nov 5, 2010 21:53
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Very nice one man, pretty complex track. As the other wiz said, nice journey.
cool walk in the forest with the ipod on track. =)
hard to give production feedback via laptop speakers on low volume on a youtube clip but it sounds ok for sure.
cheers!
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Obelizk
Amoeba
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Posted : Nov 6, 2010 03:51
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Cool i got both the Wiz's haha. Thanks guys. Appreciate the kind words.
i was thinking about working on the velocities and that stuff and just forgot about it, so thanks for bringing it up.
This was the first track I made working with the Adam A5's and I'm really happy with them 
Play this out like skazi style with a guitar instead of djing? haha
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Freeflow
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Nov 7, 2010 08:26
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nice one
i often forget that you can make such slow soundscapes and stretched melodies ontop of a kick and rolling baseline...
so it becomes like two polarity's if you get my drift
very nice melodies and it sounds clean! At 3:11 its very nice release
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knocz
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Posted : Nov 7, 2010 15:23
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I like it!
I don't like the bell's notes in the beginning I think you could play some other triads, make a nice chord progression or play with different notes, like how you do when the beat kick in (or you probably wanted it this way, it's up to you).
I would also introduce a little of the guitar in the intro, just a little nuances to introduce the track a little.
And a heavy distorted guitar playing some power chords here and there on the end could give the track a little more bite, and hock the listener in 
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MrMaunus
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Posted : Nov 7, 2010 16:31
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That was quite a track I would say! Didn't pay so much to details but listened the track with feeling and worked out very well. The track got me interested whole time so it's quite an achievement. It opened up interest to your other stuff. I'll check out the amazon page and so on. Are your releases sold somewhere as wav or flac? |
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Obelizk
Amoeba
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Posted : Nov 8, 2010 04:14
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Wow thanks a ton guys!
@freeflow yeah I get what you mean, it takes I think a special kind of lead to be stretched over fast melodies, or guitar works very well.
@knocz interesting ideas, i'll have to play around with putting some guitar in the beginning sections a bit
@MrMaunus thanks man! i'm glad you liked it. On Amazon, there's a link to the actual physical copy of the cd which has wavs on it I believe. I've been trying to work out getting paypal on another website so I can just sell them straight to people such as yourself.
http://amzn.com/B003ZSI72M this is the link for the physical CD on amazon
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mk47
Inactive User
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Posted : Nov 8, 2010 20:13
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nice man , you obviously know what you doing here , but if i were to be a bit picky .. then maybe its not glued together properly , almost like too many different tracks mixed quick almost .. i mean its good , but not seamless .. keep the bass same as the first time it hit , round :30 or so , 
sorry cant offer proper technical things etc , just a beer and heard this one , good luck , its cool track
edit : u probably know but listen to some talpa ,terrafractyl , haltya , oood etc , and even a guy on here . meatbattery ..very cool things with melodies
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Maine Coon
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Posted : Nov 9, 2010 19:37
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I like the sparse character of your music (not only this track). It has plenty of free space, I mean that the channels don’t ever clash or sit too much on top of each other, but it doesn’t feel minimal at the same time. Nice balance between instruments. And the music is good too, of course.
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elastic_plastic
Re-Boot
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Posted : Nov 10, 2010 00:37
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i really like the track... however re-work on ur mix... also i think some sounds r too high and need a lil more control on the overall highs of the track..
keep up the gr8 work... |
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knowledgecrystal
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Posted : Nov 10, 2010 02:40
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I like it, nice visuals too |
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Obelizk
Amoeba
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Posted : Nov 10, 2010 06:50
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Thanks everyone. The mix is something I'm gonna have to get used to on the new speakers I guess - the highs are something that really sound different/better because of the ribbon tweeters.
And Maine Coon that's really cool man, thanks!
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