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*the RAVEN*
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Posted : Nov 1, 2006 15:09
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Nov 2, 2006 01:41
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I remember your last demo track in here was an excellent and super bomb ! . Hope this 1 too . Download it |
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:smoke2:
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Posted : Nov 2, 2006 05:22
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some nice ideas here but i dont like the bassline , no eq / filter on bass ? to much lows crowding the track , and some more percussion bits would also be nice , around 5:37 is some nice fx with lots of reverb , cool ..sounds spacy ..
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*the RAVEN*
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Posted : Nov 3, 2006 20:21
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smoke2:::: will work on it..post an updated version soon
MOre commments........................
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xaBBu
xaBBu
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Posted : Nov 4, 2006 00:47
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Heya , hearing some really nice fx...
intro is really nice ... cool sound you made there. But I have to aggree with smoke2:: , something is wrong with the bassline and the kick. in the beginning I can hear some aliasing noise in the kick.
Also the bassline gets eaten by the sounds. They are stronger. Also try some panning/imaging on those sounds, they sound very centered throughout the track. Nice idea to change type of kicks... needs some more drive as the other one, though.
Enough critics, your sounds are there just need some work on making the mix more balanced.
Keep it, man !!
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Nov 8, 2006 17:27
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Interesting start 00:00-00:17 but as you can hear there is no connection or any fit at the volume part when all is integrate and get in (When the bass and the kik geting into the picture) This is somthing you should fix . Bass is nice (Need some work imo) and giving some good envelope feeling but the kik is realy weak and sick  . Also .. where the Hh ? All what i can hear is bass & Fx's and scratchs . Think you should stabilize more the sounds cause all is realy get wild in here .
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