RhinoCeros
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Posted : Jun 1, 2013 20:10
Hiya sounds really cool good work nice leads and grooves kept me interested. i did notice you your build ups were only like 1 2 bars maybe 4 but thats not important i would suggest at least 1 longer build up like at 7 min halfway through the song but thats just me, maybe 33 bars long only personal reference..
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Posted : Jun 2, 2013 02:53
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On 2013-06-01 20:10, RhinoCeros wrote:
Hiya sounds really cool good work nice leads and grooves kept me interested. i did notice you your build ups were only like 1 2 bars maybe 4 but thats not important i would suggest at least 1 longer build up like at 7 min halfway through the song but thats just me, maybe 33 bars long only personal reference..
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dudo, main leads (epic moments hehehe) have 2 bars, some time i extend to the third bar with the same melodie fading away with snare,and other sounds, than i change to a new basic lead coming in 1 bar,going to 2nd with a new thing then going to a 3rd with the same stuff or a new thing on the third than the main leads come again....i like it, many changes in the track and many instruments repeated only twice...in 10 min hehehehe
You mean i should have one instrument,like some acid sound, going trought the whole song for 7 min???
take a listen on Filteria, theres alot of transitions
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Posted : Jun 2, 2013 10:20
nice track well done. im not too sure about the kick, sounds abit weird to me. but i dont really listen to goa, so i may be wrong.
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Posted : Jun 2, 2013 17:21
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On 2013-06-02 10:20, COMET SHELL wrote:
nice track well done. im not too sure about the kick, sounds abit weird to me. but i dont really listen to goa, so i may be wrong.
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Posted : Jun 2, 2013 22:00
yeah i know laser kicks and they can sound really cool too. im only listening through headphones so maybe its that. nice track )
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Posted : Jun 2, 2013 22:52
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yeah i know laser kicks and they can sound really cool too. im only listening through headphones so maybe its that. nice track )
mate headphones for kick sound lame, i have bad speakers that i use to test the kick first on the speaker, than i build all my track with headphones with a little bad sounding kick
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Posted : Jun 2, 2013 23:36
yes headphones for mixing arnt good, but iv had these headphones since 2007 and have listened to many tracks in them so im used to there sound. maybe im wrong about your kick, il listen again to your track, it just seemed to stand out too much to me, maybe its the bass thats too low.
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Posted : Jun 3, 2013 02:35
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On 2013-06-02 23:36, COMET SHELL wrote:
yes headphones for mixing arnt good, but iv had these headphones since 2007 and have listened to many tracks in them so im used to there sound. maybe im wrong about your kick, il listen again to your track, it just seemed to stand out too much to me, maybe its the bass thats too low.
sure my kick can be bad im using Bazzism, i need to find some good kick samples for psytrance do you know some link?
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Posted : Jun 3, 2013 08:59
bazzism can do great kicks if you tune it right. i know its supposed to be loud, but its not ment to be "TOO" loud. use google to look for samples. there millions out there.
hey leave the kick and bass how it is. i shouldnt have commented on the mix.i was just giving you my honest opinion to help you get the track sounding good.and to me the kick sounds wrong, if i heard this track in a record shop i wouldnt buy it because of the kick, the rest of the track is really creative and you have done a nice job.
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Posted : Jun 3, 2013 19:29
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bazzism can do great kicks if you tune it right. i know its supposed to be loud, but its not ment to be "TOO" loud. use google to look for samples. there millions out there.
hey leave the kick and bass how it is. i shouldnt have commented on the mix.i was just giving you my honest opinion to help you get the track sounding good.and to me the kick sounds wrong, if i heard this track in a record shop i wouldnt buy it because of the kick, the rest of the track is really creative and you have done a nice job.
you are right mate, i have other track that im listening again with the kick to loud clipping and overlaying other frequencies...
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