minus
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Posted : Dec 18, 2010 22:23:22
new works happening, samples takes from cheech n chong: up in smoke,some words on direction to take, and sounds to explore would be nice
peace n bom
daark
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Posted : Dec 19, 2010 17:43
yes mister minus its heavy and very good
i would like to have something positive there too so it won't be so much pressure you know what i mean
it sounds very i'm gonna kill you but some positive blink would be very nice
you know just too keep the good vibe too... lighten up things a bit to bring smiles
something i try to get more and more in my work
emm for sure you need more hats for the groove
maybe not one but more and to keep as a drum loop of hats...some groovy filler.cause the rythm is stuck, release it .
anyways no more leads it is perfect like that keep one at a time(something for me to remember) leave this space keep it up like that
Architekt
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Posted : Dec 20, 2010 00:32
Yeah heavy as! Nice big bass sound. Bassline progression is cool too.
There is a strong base here for a really good track. I agree with daark on more hats, and more crashes. You can do some interesting things with crashes, and crash like sounds - e.g have a long reverb, export to audio file, and pitch bend the tail of the sample up or down.
Also, there is heaps of room for more layers in the background to thicken up the sound. I think everything that you have there is sounding great, but there is room for lots more! Perhaps some short one-off fx sounds?
Last thing - maybe a few less sample? It sounds great at the start, and in the break, but perhaps it might be better to leave it out of the main sections of the song? A few words here and there in gaps might be cool.
minus
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Posted : Dec 20, 2010 17:36
thanks broz for the words and feedback,yes totally agree with both of you'z of adding some percussions to thicken up the sound, it sounds kindoff empty yea, but i dont want to mix in too many sound layers, i like it just like that, clean, but ofcourse i need to make it stick and clean and crisp in every beat till the end, so the suggestions would help.. what should i do for ending? same kindo bass? or go more full power? suggestions?and about the voice samples used, yea i have over used in some places in this version, i will fix this, and take out some of them, and use them in later part of the trak ya,but i am not sure of 1 main lead, i thnk that i have to use, or in the end atleast to complete the sound, but i am not sure,i will update track soon,will keep you guys posted here.any other suggestion would rule!
peace n bom
and very good
