Nomad Moon
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Posted : Jul 3, 2011 16:49:15
Good morning just a sketch still, advices most-welcome
soundcloud turns it a bit worse but...
Nomad Moon
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Posted : Jul 4, 2011 13:12
no one? i was mainly concerned about the production side
Sunrise Travellers
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Posted : Jul 4, 2011 14:05
Good morning mate!
I really enjoy the newgoa style...
Well now about your track...i like it...the whole idea is good but at 2.47 the melody and the bassline does not "stick" well...something wrong with the bass note i think (i mean when the bassline changing note)
I'm not the specialist you know i just say my opinion maybe i'm wrong...
As i said the whole idea is good so...waiting for the final result (full track) to have a complete opinion...
Keep it up bro!
Cheers///
...into the wild....
Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Jul 4, 2011 14:48
Hey
Here few things :
Less talking pads , And if 'Yes' so somthing that will fit more , Theres a feeling in there (Intro) That music is going to one way and the talking pad to other . (This is simple my friend - Mic .. Then you can control and 'Manage' things (Samples) with your voice in/To your story , Then all will get imo more meaning and maybe integrated in much better with somthing you have find here and there or enforce you , Other this pad the mello in the background is nice But allso couldt understand those bass changes + With the vol and that so maybe try to make an new order with thos two (Bass & Kik) Then bring the others in , 02:47 is realy cool , Ones of those mello's that taking you inside , I like (Usualy dont like those who repeating themselfes But as i have said already there kind of magic in) But try change the order - Bass & Kik are leading the track (Not the mello) So we could get some more idea of the all down area . Add more power in - More compressors , Machines And effects on your sounds will complete the all picture .
Must say heard better tracks from you at the sound part/Point but here i see and feel a beginning of creation coming more from inside from the deep soul .. Stay there and bring those sounds to here ..
naretir
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Posted : Jul 4, 2011 20:37
i would cut the hihats in the intro. and mabye add some other hi sounds Ohh yeah. fiddle and boom. Ableton addict :)
Been here since October 14, 2008.
faxinadu
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Posted : Jul 4, 2011 22:18
Nomad Moon
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Posted : Jul 5, 2011 00:41
First thank u all for your comments and advices i'm happy u guys liked the style, and for that i have to say thanks to faxinadu, that marvellous set you so kindly let us download made me understand that i have to make the music that speaks to my heart and i like the modern aproach to goatrance as Traveller said @Cardinals:
my good friend i don't have the skills you have, i understand i need to give more power to the kick bass just don't know how , but i'm working As for the hats in the beggining i was thinking of removing them but sometimes i'm lazy as hell
Thanks guys i'll post when it's almost done
faxinadu
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Posted : Jul 5, 2011 16:54
, but i'm working 
sure i'll do that, it may take a while though , busy life friend 
