jeeboomba
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Posted : Jan 28, 2014 20:52:41
hello guys .. here's a new work i started... i think flow come out ok.. but not really happy wid bass.. have left it for another session... chk it out.. would love ur take on it, cause posting here has helped get a plot , , structure , etc.. so i leave it here.. listen
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Posted : Jan 31, 2014 18:41
I like the effects, very nice sounds. The bass after 1:15 is crazy (even cooler when contrasted with the previous simple k-b-k-b) - in a positive way:)
But in the second part bass indeed sounds like... underwater?
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Posted : Jan 31, 2014 19:08
Hey!.
Cool sounds!, loving the atmo.
bass in first part is ok, but 1.15 it gets little muddy.
Cool bouncy base.
Structure is quite good.
3.25 is not so smooth tho, you should work with that transistion.
jeeboomba
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Posted : Jan 31, 2014 19:59
hi guys thnx tons for the words.. grevinsky was hoping to hear ur words on structure.. cause previous two three critcs of urs made me look again.. i agree wid the muddy bass at 1.15 .. and @hnd.. i was trying for a low bass.. maybe it turn out like tht.. will work on the bass patches soon.. will post update after the weekend.. thnx.. cheers..
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Feb 3, 2014 10:58
thnx man upavas .. i try to explore new ideas with each track , and i notice my production getting better..
here's this weekends work.. will make an outro and end it after this.. any of got mixing suggestions would be real cool.. cause i head there next... thnx.. cheers..
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Feb 15, 2014 13:41
hey guys so i finished writing and arranging this work.. i wanna sit down for a mixing .. i can really take some pointers frm here.. or any other words would be awsome too.. cheers