The gains are too low! I can hardly hear anything in my headphones. (Obvious exaggeration... but still...)
Around the 1.22 mark you need a snare, to dictate the compass.
From what I gather, you have a COOL sense of rhythm. Very original in that sense. And that is always positive.
Use a bass. A REAL bass. Something bouncy, perhaps? Or maybe it is too low and I can't hear anything?
Play with more samples, use more layers so it doesn't get stale. You're just showing us the main loop for three minutes. We want to see the rest. The nuttery in the background, synths, effects and so on.
What are you using? FL Studio? It's a common problem in FL Studio things sounding too low, unless you've been working on it for a while and learned some mastering basics.
Use at least a multiband compressor and a limiter, to bring the sounds up. And put the gain up on most of them.
For a beginner (I hope), it's not bad at all. That loop with a snare would be delicious. I'm almost tempted to remix this joint. Good job.
jeeboomba
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Posted : Jul 30, 2011 18:49
cheers man,
the bass, i give attack to make it like that.. will chk on what you said.
yea me on FL and havent played with compressor or limiter.
really appreciate teh feedback and yeah will try more layers
bom
re-arrange what you thought was real
faxinadu
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