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- - - - New unfinished track - - - -melodic 145bpm
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ginfizz
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Posted : Oct 29, 2006 14:25
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hi boys (and maybe girls), i'm working on this track since 2 days. it would be nice to hear some comments from your side about the sound overall, compression, etc...
it's the first track i post here. and i really have to say that all of you were a great help!!! thanks a lot!
here's the link:
http://www.mytempdir.com/1024029
and....any comment is a help.
cheers
martin
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Electrip
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Posted : Oct 29, 2006 14:27
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it needs password man |
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ginfizz
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Posted : Oct 29, 2006 14:32
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oh shit....
password is oylster9
i'm sorry!
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ginfizz
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Posted : Oct 29, 2006 15:13
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hi electrip.
does it work now?
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ginfizz
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Posted : Oct 30, 2006 10:09
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c'mon guys.... no comments?
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assaf_zo
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Posted : Oct 30, 2006 17:16
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Well,
Good track overall, but watch it... ur getting a little bit monotonic... try to make 2 parts to ur track instead of 1 (its that way right now)
the sitar on the start before the beat get in, man i miss it through all the track play with him and faster
this is a good idea for the second part... let them miss this beautiful sitar sound and in the 2nd part u let them have it
the atmosphere... good but u miss ur own watermark here... the speacial wepon to complete this track !!! again must not be monotnic but rythemic and filtered
i hope ull complite unfinished it sound allmost finished to me
 HUGE BIG BLUE-MARVEL THAT WE LIVE ON |
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ginfizz
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Posted : Oct 30, 2006 18:48
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thanks assaf_zo,
good idea with the sitar. i was never thinking about this option. i know it's a bit monotonic actually. i will try to improve this and let you know!
any others?
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Fubalone
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Posted : Oct 30, 2006 23:14
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its a nice track... i liked the intro!!
but u could make some changes during the track to make it more intresting... =D
nice break, btw =D
gratz 4 the track |
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