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new twilight track >>>pavaka

pavaka
IsraTrance Full Member

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Posts :  805
Posted : Feb 23, 2007 14:37
long time no see.. busy season

this one's called D.N.A
bouncy twilght track..
check it out.. needs a bit of mastering..

DNA
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5038216&q=lo

hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5038216&q=hi




peace

          www.soundcloud.com/pavaka

www.myspace.com/pavakadeej

www.myspace.com/shroomhunters
dija
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posts :  483
Posted : Feb 23, 2007 19:04
Listening....

+1:00m
I think the bass could be improved. Needs a little more midrange so that it's more audible, even on my bassy headphones its not real audible.

+2:00m
I'm not a fan of the detuned synth or the real deep pads that are used.

+3:00m
Finally have a lead of some kind. The lead never manifested into anything which was a disappointment before it dropped off.

+5:00m
The trackc omes back stronger with a similar lead. The lead is a little more satisfying this time.

+6:00m
Theres some things going on that hurt my ears hear, one FX on the lead when it oscillates runs into some nasty frequency


Overall I think there should be more lead work, maybe a melody or two. I think there should be more changes throughout, the same parts are relived several times. Which is acceptable but they should be relived a bit differently than previously.
Yellow Warrior
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posts :  898
Posted : Feb 23, 2007 19:58
Yes, Long time indeed!!

I heard the track about 3-4 times and i really wanted to like it but Sorry guys, its not as good as some of your previous work.

First of the vocals just didn't do it for me. Dont like the processing work on them.
The leads are pretty ordinary as well. I definitely think they need a lot more tunage.

Just seems like you wanted to finih off the track in a hurry.

Sorry guys but was expecting so much more from you!!

Never mind, guess it was the damn time off you took!

Keep working and Don't give up man!

You guys have some really good ideas Just keep those juices flowing.

Good Luck!!!!           Rather than feeling that you're about to have the rug pulled from under you, let me teach you how to dance on a flying carpet
pavaka
IsraTrance Full Member

Started Topics :  87
Posts :  805
Posted : Mar 5, 2007 17:40
thanks for the reviews dija and Yellow Warrior .. will look into it
(have ben pretty busy with gigs)
anymore comments /opinions welcome

peace

ps:check out the shroomhunters new remix           www.soundcloud.com/pavaka

www.myspace.com/pavakadeej

www.myspace.com/shroomhunters
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