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new tune 144 bpm comments welcome
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vipal
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Posted : Apr 8, 2013 20:57:38
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Apr 10, 2013 12:13
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Hey man.
It starts kind of fast, you could let it build little slower in the beginning, would give more energy and power.
The synth which comes on 1.24 feels abit out of place, both in character and timing, especially 1.45.
The new synth coming on 2.37 needs abit of eq´ing.
I miss a few breaks, Now its going from one thing to the other without any dynamical change in power.
I suggest you work more with tension and release.
There´s cool things happening, but now the structure and progression is not so clear, and that kills the story line.
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vipal
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Posted : Apr 10, 2013 21:10
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metamorphosis music
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Posted : Apr 10, 2013 22:33
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hey great trak man, lots of sick sequences n ideas, but grev is right u could work on transitioning to make everything flow better n mix littl, keep it up |
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vipal
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Posted : Apr 11, 2013 00:32
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