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New tune 134 bpm.
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aQuaFeeLL
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Posted : Jun 17, 2007 16:16
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Hi everybody.
This track is still in progress and some advices to improve it are welcome.
Would really apreciate that.
(tracks name "Your way to heaven")
Thanx for the attencion.
www.myspace.com/aquafeell
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aQuaFeeLL
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Posted : Jun 18, 2007 14:31
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Jun 18, 2007 17:21
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ur kick/bass combo needs work cos the bass looses power over the kick! with the resolte of a dominating kick in the track! i think the bass is too sub..
in the middle there is a snare/clap coming that sounds too dry and loud!
synths and fx are too much in the backround loud them up abit!
the melodies are fine but when they come after the break it doesnt really make a difference and the track becomes static add some more groove elements and synths to increase the interest/climax!
overall nice work
orange
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Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Jun 18, 2007 20:41
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Cant talk about sound quality, since im on pc speakers. I would add that the snare sounds not so good on those, kinda dryish (Both of them). More variety is needed imo, you did one hell of a job in the previous tracks with FX and synths. More cutooff automations will do some good things.
I would like to hear a different bass from you, not soundwise, notewise.
From minute 4 and something (the pings) its going awesome and emotional! Great work there!!!!!
You can make a real jem from that tune!
I prefer to say the truth instead of writing something like "yeah fucken awesome track", I know you can do much better.
my two cents,
Misha
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aQuaFeeLL
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Posted : Jun 18, 2007 23:37
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Guys really really thank you.
These advices will help a lot!
You will hear the more worked version soon.
thanx again!
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Psynaesthesian
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Posted : Jun 19, 2007 10:04
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hi aqua .. trying to sort out a myspace player problem .... will come back to u when sorted!!
B'om Shankara!!
"... b'om ..." |
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aQuaFeeLL
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Posted : Jun 19, 2007 18:14
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Alias
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Posted : Jun 20, 2007 15:25
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